“You know,” Jessica muttered, “it’s pretty mind-boggling to think I’m helping to fix Nicholas Morrow up with someone else. Even if she is my cousin.”
Details: Originally published in April 1988 by Bantam Books. Paperback, 150 pages.
Summary/Overview: Kelly Bates, cousin to Elizabeth and Jessica (her mom is Alice’s sister), is coming to stay with the Wakefields. She’s having trouble adjusting to her new family situation, because her mom is getting remarried to a man who has children of his own. Apparently Kelly is staying for a while, because they enroll her in classes at Sweet Valley High. The twins are thrilled and decide to play up the fact that Kelly looks a lot like them by dressing alike and messing with everyone. Before Kelly arrives, Alice warns the twins to not say anything disparaging about Kelly’s dad, even though they’ve always been told he’s kind of a deadbeat.
Kelly arrives and hits it off with the kids at school and catches the attention of Kirk Anderson, who she becomes immediately smitten with, despite the gentle warnings from the twins and basically everyone else that he’s not a very nice boy. The twins were hoping to set her up with Nicholas Morrow, but Kelly only has eyes for Kirk. He asks her to be his date for the upcoming costume contest and dance at the country club and she says yes, even though she’s also agreed to go with Nicholas. She doesn’t bother cancelling her plans with Nicholas, either.
All Kelly can talk about in the days leading up to her birthday is the arrival of her father, whom she completely adores. She brags about him letting her do whatever she wants when she’s with him, and she plans to ask him to move closer to Sweet Valley so she can stay and live with him instead of her mom. On the night of her birthday, her dad shows up super late, doesn’t bring a present, and stays for about five minutes before claiming he has to rush back to L.A. for a client dinner. Kelly is crushed but still can’t admit that he might be a complete piece of shit.
The twins and Kelly decide on a group costume for the party: they’ll go as the “no-evil” monkeys (as in see-no, speak-no, hear-no), and spend a bunch of time working on their costumes. At the dance, their costumes are a hit, and it isn’t long before Kirk has convinced her to blow the popsicle stand and go hang out at Miller’s Point. Once there, he cracks a beer open and tries to have sex with her, not taking no for an answer until she literally fights him off and kicks him in the shins. Enraged, he throws his bottle at some rocks, and the sound of glass breaking triggers a long-repressed childhood memory of why her mom left her dad. She runs home crying, and Kelly’s mom gets on a plane to come get her. She’s going back to Tucson.
The B-Plot: None to speak of.
“Yeah, that’s why you wanted to wear a leotard,” Elizabeth teased. She tossed the ball back into the water. “You just want to show off that gorgeous body of yours.”
Sweet Valley Social Calendar
Estimated Elapsed Time: 2 weeks
– Kelly’s 17th (??) birthday
– Costume contest/dance at the country club
Trivia/Fun Facts:
– Costumes at the party include Pirate (Kirk), “traditional” Mexican girl (Sandy), Donald Duck (Ken), Princess Diana (Lila), dirty wino (Jeffrey), Rita Hayworth (Susan Stewart), Hippie (Enid), a bunch of grapes (Winston)
– Store name alert: Sport Zone and Book Worm are mentioned
– Steven has been up in Puget Sound doing a “term project”
Pop Culture:
– Alice’s Adventures in Wonderland
– 3 little pigs/3 Musketeers/3 blind mice
– Tess of the D’Ubervilles
– Ernie/Sesame Street
– Gourmet magazine
Does it hold up? (A totally unqualified critical analysis): Woof, I don’t know. I know that these books are not known for their nuance (and that I’m beating a dead horse at this point), but nothing about the plot here makes much sense. If Kelly is having trouble adjusting to changes in her home life, why would the answer be shipping her across the country to live with people she hasn’t seen in nearly a decade? How would that help her get used to her new stepfather and step-siblings? Also, we’re just pulling teens out of their school in the middle of the year and plopping them into a new school for just a couple of months without a moment’s hesitation? ALSO ALSO: wouldn’t Kelly’s mom have to come and actually enroll her, or are Alice and Ned being granted legal guardianship over her? I know I’m overthinking this, but it’s very weird to me, and it’s more fun to think about these giant plot holes than it is to think about the situation with her dad, which is a huge bummer.
There’s no nuance in these books when it comes to plot or characters, but even so, Kelly’s dad makes my skin crawl. The truth is that though he’s underdeveloped and probably a bit of a caricature, the way he behaves when he finally deigns to show up for her birthday (a scene that still makes absolutely no sense to me in terms of logistics) isn’t that far off the mark from how I’ve seen m*n act in real life. So, there’s that.
The only other thing worth touching on here: Nicholas Morrow asks Kelly to go to the dance with him, and she accepts before also accepting Kirk’s offer. The twins ask Kelly to make sure to tell Nicholas her plans change, and she never does this, and it’s never brought up again. Then it appears Nicholas doesn’t show up at the dance at all? Did this plot point just get dropped?